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Gustavo Adolfo Bécquer (1836 - 1870)

Rimas in Translation

VII   IX    XIV   XV   XXI 
XXIII  XXIV  XXX  LIII   LVI LXIII

 

Esta sección no quiere ni va a incluir todas las Rimas de Bécquer. Como poeta y traductor bien sé que toda traducción es cuestión de opinión y siempre se puede mejorar: si alguien quiere contribuir con sus proprias traducciones,será muy agradecido.
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Rima VII

In the dark corner of the hall,

perhaps forgotten by her mistress,

silent and dusty,

laid the harp.



So many notes slept in her strings,

as the songbird sleeps in the branches,

waiting for the snowy hand

that knows how to awake them!



Alas! - I thought - how often does genius

likewise sleep in the deepest of the heart,

and a voice, like Lazarus, awaits

to be told "Rise and walk!

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Translation: All Rights Reserved © 1999 Guia K. Monti atotos@wol.es

Rima IX

The whining air kisses

and playfully curls the nimble waves;

The sun kisses the western cloud,

lending it purple and golden hues,

The flame, around the burning trunk

to kiss another flame it slips,

And even the willow tree, bowing under his own weight,

to the river that kisses him returns the kiss.

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Rima XIV

I saw you for a brief instant,   floating before my eyes

the sight of her eyes took hold in me

like the dark stain rimmed with fire

that floats and blind when looking at the sun.

 

Wherever I  look

I behold again her flaming pupils,

but I don't find you, you are

your eyes, nothing more.

 

From the corner of my bedroom I see them

shining fantastically wild;

when I sleep I feel them raise,

wide open, staring at me.

 

I know that by night the will-of-the-wisp

leads the wayfarer to his death;

I am drawn by your eyes,

drawn, yet I do not know whereto.

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Translation: All Rights Reserved © 1999 Guia K. Monti atotos@wol.es

Rima XV

Hovering misty gauze,

curling belt of white surf,

reverberating sound

of a golden harp,

breeze' light kiss, wave of light:

that' s you.

 

You, impalpable shadow,

everytime I try to touch you, you vanish -

just like the flame, the sound,

the mist, and the whining of the blue lake!

 

A resounding wave in a sea that knows no beaches,

a wandering comet in the empty space,

the protracted lament of the voiceless wind,

eternal longing for something better:

that' s me.

 

In my agony, day and night, I gaze

searchingly into your eyes;

crazed, I run tirelessly

after a shadow, following the ardent daughter of an apparition!

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Translation: All Rights Reserved © 1999 Guia K. Monti atotos@wol.es

Rima XXI

What is poetry ?, you ask, while nailing

your blue gaze into mine.

What is poetry ? You ask it ?

Poetry... that's you.

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Rima XXIII

(To her. I don't know...)

For a glance, the Earth,

for a smile, the Heavens,

for a kiss... I don't know

what  I would give you for a kiss !

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Rima XXIV



Two red tongues of fire

entwined to the same trunk

they draw near and, when they kiss,

they are one flame;



two notes that the hand

plays on the lute at the same time,

they meet in the air

and harmoniously embrace;



two waves that together

come to die on a beach

and when they break are crowned

by a plume of silver;



two banks of mist

rising from the lake

when they meet up there in the sky

they become one white cloud;


two ideas that are shaped together;

two kisses that mingle together;

two echoes that resound as one:

these are our two souls.

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Rima XXX

Tears were welling into her eyes,

Words of forgiveness were coming to my lips;

Pride spoke and she dried her tears

And those words went unspoken.

 

I go one way, she goes another;

but, when I think of our mutual love,

I still say :  - Why didn't I  speak that day ?

And she:   - Why didn't I cry ? 

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Rima LIII

    The black swallows will return

to nest on your balcony,

and with their wings they will knock

    playfully at its windows.

 

    But those who slowed down in their flight

to contemplate your beauty and my happiness,

those who learnt our names...

    those....will not return!

 

    The luscious honeysuckle will again

climb the walls of your garden,

and, even more beautiful in the afternoon,

    its flowers will bloom again.

 

    But those flowers adorned by dew -

drops we watched to tremble

and fall, as if they were the day's tears...

    those... will not return!

 

    Ardent words of love will echo again

in your ears,

your heart from its deep slumber

    will perhaps awaken.

    Mute, lost in thought and kneeling in worship

as if by the altar of a God,

that is how I loved you...; don't deceive yourself,

    nobody will love you so!

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Translation: All Rights Reserved © 1999 Guia K. Monti atotos@wol.es

Rima LVI

Today like yesterday, tomorrow just like today,

                                    always the same !

A grey sky, an eternal horizon

                                    and to walk....., to walk.

 

The heart moves ryhthmically, like a stupid

                                    machine.

The brain's listless intelligence

                                    dozes in a corner.

 

The soul, longs for paradise,

                                    a quest without faith,

tiredness with no aim, wave that moves,

                                    knowing not why.

 

A monotone voice sings incessantly

                                    the same song,

a monotone drop constantly falls

                                    and keeps falling, endlessly.

 

Thus the days go by

                    one running after the other;

today just like yesterday...., and all

                    with no joy nor pain.

 

Ah, sometimes I longingly recall

                    past woes !

Suffering is bitter, but at least

                    to suffer is to live !

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Rima LXIII

Memories of  past days

like a swarm of irate bees

come out of a dark corner

to haunt me.

 

I want to drive them away. Vain effort !

They surround me, they harrass me,

and, one by one, they thrust in me

the sharp sting that inflames the soul.

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Translation: All Rights Reserved © 1999 Guia K. Monti atotos@wol.es


Todas las Rimas

Rimas I - XI

XII - XXIX

XXX - XL

XLI - LI

LII - LXV

LXVI - LXXV

LXXVI - LXXXVII

Resources  Recursos: All things Bécquer - Todo sobre Bécquer

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